Walking together under the moon cause it’s late
Knowing the stake , as I speak wisely and make no mistake
The rush was good , since those times were great
Look around, I look with no hate
You are there , with all my mind I’m awake
I see the patterns in you , patterns I relate
Within that phone , am I a Bait
Was all a game ? Or am I played ?
Confused as I look , nights become Haze
Can we be in no play, crazier gets the phase
You were the dream I had ,
I woke up and pen’nd , in the middle of the night
And this phase is closest you could get off my sight
” Eyes are wide , cheeks are red ,
With no play, we can take it far ahead
To the cloud maybe , then to some star
Historical we might our story
Story of a pissant kid ,who got glory
Of love and happiness in the same astral ”
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“I see the patterns in you, patterns I relate“ – my favourite line..! Beautiful lines..!! Good going man..!! ❤️❤️
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Yeah really beautiful😊
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Lovely ! This shows your precocious writing abilities …. Great Jatin .
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I can feel the words you wrote here…. pretty good
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Fantastic
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Thank-you 😊🎈
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Has a great flow! Nice work!
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Thank-you :-)🎈
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Nice thought and good expression! Congrats.
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Thank-you 🎈
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A soliloquy, that’s running in the mind of lover is beautiful…
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Thank-you so much 💞
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Thank-you so much 💞💞
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You have objectified the feeling of lover. Writing such poems is to live in that moment with character to whom you are going to express in your writing. It is the sense of liveliness which make alive even the concreted things.
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Couldn’t have said it better 👌💥
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I think one time thanks was enough. Is it?
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Hahaha XD yes … But I’m really glad you got the inner part of the character and that depth – space – state of mind… Made my day actually .. so yeah XD
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Keep on exploring the skill of writing and make your each day a wonderful day…good luck Jatin!
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Thank-you
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Well not at all…
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❤
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